waves lap unrestrained
the haughty sol mounts the sea
only I assent
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This image fueled a discussion about whether it was a sunrise or sunset…As we thought about the verse that you wrote, we decided on a sunset. Either way, we enjoyed viewing this post. Thanks!
That’s funny because it also looks to me like a sunset and the initial poem I wrote for the photo made it seem like it was a sunset, using terms like diffident waves and weary sun as if the day was spent, but then I remembered it was actually a sunrise photo I took at Wrightsville Beach in NC, so I rewrote the poem so that the waves are unrestrained and the sun is mounting.
This image fueled a discussion about whether it was a sunrise or sunset…As we thought about the verse that you wrote, we decided on a sunset. Either way, we enjoyed viewing this post. Thanks!
That’s funny because it also looks to me like a sunset and the initial poem I wrote for the photo made it seem like it was a sunset, using terms like diffident waves and weary sun as if the day was spent, but then I remembered it was actually a sunrise photo I took at Wrightsville Beach in NC, so I rewrote the poem so that the waves are unrestrained and the sun is mounting.
gorgeous
🙂
Eloquent use of Language Anand Bose from Kerala
Thank you for saying so, Anand.